MaAlGon3's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Arthur Morgan]

The rendering and blocky shape language makes it so unique.

[LOTTIE!]

Major props for being able to depict the form of anatomy in her figure and pulling off some lively gestures. The middle bottom one is particularly impressive cause of the perspective.

al3s responds:

Thanks :D

[Glasses girl]

I love the hard shading and coloring. The pinky finger on her left hand looks kinda broken but otherwise a very stylish, well done artwork.

[Goodnight]

I would say that the head is a bit too big but you stylized it cleverly and it still works, it looks coherent. It's cute, sexy, pretty and an appealing design overall.

[Dark Eclair]

Great job on the body. In regard to the hatching lines, maybe they should follow the form and contour of the body to help give it volume. Also, try to give the hair more of a natural gesture because it feels a bit stiff.

BluMiu responds:

Thanks for the advice!

[SQUIBOOTY]

You've got a solid grasp of anatomy and how to create clean linework but I suggest you practice controlling the thickness of your line strokes because I feel that the lineart on her arms and hands could have read better if they were more consistent. If you look at her hands, sometimes the lines are thick when they should be thin (like on her pinky fingers). The sweat drops are pretty well done and major credit for understanding how the pelvis is structured.

Wolflance responds:

thank you for the feedback

[Jill Valentine]

The perspective on the rocket launcher falters a bit because of the angle you drew the front holes in. Still, you're killing it on translating the design into your own visual language. You also get major points for the adorable Nemesis. I love that you use lots of curves on the body because many artists aren't aware how truly bumpy and curvy the body is.

[Miruko workout]

Maybe her chest could have expanded and contracted a little bit more to signify that she's breathing a bit heavily from the effort but otherwise wonderful.

[Leon The Professional]

Major credit for the lineart, varied yet coherent. The stylization is brilliant, especially the way you designed Leon. The eyes are a little too high for my taste but that's a personal niggle. Great work, following and looking forward to more!

[The Moo]

I love your painting style.

ZephyrGales responds:

Thanks!