It wouldn't be fair to take points off because I'm lost on what the story or characters are since I haven't viewed from episode 1 but their personalities were made rather clear very quickly and that is to be congratulated. The animation and the story's pace (the storytelling in particular) do feel rushed a several times to me. Perhaps it's just technical limitations or such, in which case I should respect how much effort an animation like this takes, especially for the amount of people who worked on it (if that's everyone listed off at the credits). I absolutely loved the color choices and character designs (especially the spirits and their human forms). The voice acting did seem off to me at first but it grew on me rather well, though I'd still suggest polishing that particular area up further if possible in future episodes. Still, credit where it's due, creative, interesting and good overall.

I shouldn't need to tell you that your character designs are fantastic, almost nearing iconic, since everyone else has mentioned it. One thing that I felt wasn't as great was that sometimes, the jokes went by so fast that I had to rewind or rewatch the animation to catch them, might be a problem on my part. Not really your fault, though, since the sleepycast is very quickly paced when it comes to moving from joke to joke. The drawings and colors are effin' beautiful, and I wish I'll be able to make backgrounds as good as those. Special nod for your lip synching. Overall, more than just a solid effort, an actually great animated retelling of the sleepy crew's comedic sensibilities.

I often lament the fact that animated fight scenes focus so much on portraying the speed of their characters that they sacrifice impact and weight, but this masterpiece finds the perfect balance. Even though the characters fought incredibly swiftly, I could sense the strength and weight behind every attack. The choreography is everything except flawed as far as I'm concerned. I really hope any and all animator or future animators who watch this take note and study how to portray weight, momentum and physical impact in their fight scenes.

As a side note, the creator's love for these types of games comes through without a hint of ambiguity, props for having a live action goof in an animation that didn't come across as forced or awkward.

I really wish I had something critical to say about it but, even though I'm sure that perfection is unreachable, I can't for the life of me find anything that diminishes how much I loved and enjoyed this video.

This would get bonus points cause I really like Fran already but it doesn't need them. This is just straight up amazing.

My only critique is that the cloth that drapes from her collarbone should fold more according to the angle and her pose. Other than that, great work. It's a nice mix of anime and western-cartoony.

Pretty simple but it's cute, sketchy and her design is charming.