MaAlGon3's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[steve]

This design treads the line between charming and uncanny valley very carefully. Ultimately, it's appealing. Major kudos for that. I think the environment could be more minecraft-esque to add to the effect of the character.

nakvi responds:

I think the same about the environment, I realized that once I finished it. Anyway im glad you like it! ^^

[What should we do?!]

If this isn't traditional, you've blown my mind. The colors are so lovely and vivid, yet not overwhelming. It really feels like somewhere serene you can be to contemplate a journey.

Pasilion responds:

Thanks. Yes this is digital, I sometimes tend to keep colors more natural even its easy to go for more saturated colors in digital.

[Kanto]

Bonus points for adding a cheeky Missingno. I especially like how you simplified each design but kept enough to make them very easily identifiable. Must have taken quite a bit of effort.

Cawbird responds:

You noticed! Thank you, it certainly did

[Yelena - Christmas]

The drawing itself is good and the color has a nice texture to it but I think there's too much white and that's really distracting. Still, the little color you used was applied well with a good understanding of anatomy and form.

GaGe199X responds:

Whoa! I never get constructive criticism on any platform. I really appreciate this! Thank you!

[LOTTIE!]

Major props for being able to depict the form of anatomy in her figure and pulling off some lively gestures. The middle bottom one is particularly impressive cause of the perspective.

al3s responds:

Thanks :D

[Dark Eclair]

Great job on the body. In regard to the hatching lines, maybe they should follow the form and contour of the body to help give it volume. Also, try to give the hair more of a natural gesture because it feels a bit stiff.

BluMiu responds:

Thanks for the advice!

[SQUIBOOTY]

You've got a solid grasp of anatomy and how to create clean linework but I suggest you practice controlling the thickness of your line strokes because I feel that the lineart on her arms and hands could have read better if they were more consistent. If you look at her hands, sometimes the lines are thick when they should be thin (like on her pinky fingers). The sweat drops are pretty well done and major credit for understanding how the pelvis is structured.

Wolflance responds:

thank you for the feedback

[The Moo]

I love your painting style.

ZephyrGales responds:

Thanks!

[Octobit Day 22: Ghost Story]

I'm a big fan of pixel art and I have to say that this is an excellent illustration.

Ioruko responds:

Thanks so much!

[Cyborg]

Okay... this one's really subjective cause I'm a sucker for the style and even more so for the scribbly animation. The details are interesting too.

Jogurt-NG responds:

I appreciate it thank you!!