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[SCA: The Cometh (S1E9)]

I shouldn't need to tell you that your character designs are fantastic, almost nearing iconic, since everyone else has mentioned it. One thing that I felt wasn't as great was that sometimes, the jokes went by so fast that I had to rewind or rewatch the animation to catch them, might be a problem on my part. Not really your fault, though, since the sleepycast is very quickly paced when it comes to moving from joke to joke. The drawings and colors are effin' beautiful, and I wish I'll be able to make backgrounds as good as those. Special nod for your lip synching. Overall, more than just a solid effort, an actually great animated retelling of the sleepy crew's comedic sensibilities.

Plebs responds:

I hope you're not just sweet talking me here hah.

As far as the iconic character designs go, that's debatable. I agree that the pacing is rather fast at times, but no harm in replaying. I tried to keep in mind that the details shouldn't distract the viewer from the focal point too much. I can't say I agree with the appraise on the last two technical points. Those are a few of my weakpoints as of now. However no doubt in time it will catch up.

I might be overly critical, but I wouldn't be improving if it wasn't for that. Thanks for the elaborate review though, always helpful.

[Baby Hands]

Okay, so, I don't even need to tell you that I think the animation was great, because it clearly was (even though there wasn't much of it). I want to tell you about comedic timing.

Yours is spot on, to a T. Fast paced moving from joke to joke not stopping anywhere that would ruin the constant laughter. I do think that it ended too abruptly but I think that was intended? After all, the final line was a title drop and a visual gag relating to it. I suppose that it works in my opinion. It seems like a spontaneous and comedic rapid fire train-of-thought with animated visuals.

Tapyoca responds:

Very very good sense of pacing you have there. You could not be any more dead on, I originally intended for it to go on for a while, but cut it off abruptly. Namely to keep it under 30 secs. Its something Ill work on in future projects. Thanks for the feedback :)

[MOANCORE]

The bit where the show takes a violent turn in tone and content (the fight scene near the end)) was what cemented how funny this was to me. All the other jokes were solid but that was brilliant. Animation was smooth and easily readable, as is your custom, a quality animation on all accounts.

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks!